Thread:Crimson and Darkness/@comment-33162486-20180128164134/@comment-33162486-20180128171107

LMAO. Is that really the best excuse you can come up with? I think those edits were actually necessary. For example: On Asia's page, the sentence:

"Asia was also in deep shock when she learned from Kokabiel  that the God of the Bible was dead."

The word "was" shouldn't be there; that word should be replaced with "is" because God is currently deceased in the series (not referring to the beginning of the sentence).

Also, on Gasper's page, in the trivia section, it says:

"Gasper's height is 150 cm. (4 feet 11 inches) and his weight is 40 kg. (88 lbs.), according to the visual book with his data. Which makes him the shortest male character in the series to date."

This sentence should've been kept as:

"Gasper's height is 150 cm. (4 feet 11 inches) and his weight is 40 kg. (88 lbs.), according to the visual book with his data; this makes him the shortest male character in the series to date."